Friday, September 18, 2009

*fire* Comments

Rating: 3.1

feel the heat
sting of the burn
like a constant painful thorn
scars leaving reminds
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Maya Hanson 03 March 2014

this is amazing! ! ! short but very powerful!

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Heather Wilkins 03 October 2013

a good write on fire. once burned the scar remains. good ink

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James Mclain 18 September 2009

feel the fire and two learn the pain.. while the thorn.. once left behind..is the sun that stings..iip

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