Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lay not your blazing shadow
Upon my wife’s insipid body
I have touched her all over already
She is not barren for you to assault
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Nikhail Pandhi
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Salu Salu 29 September 2009

you are a true poet.... i would say genuine creation when u scribbled...Don’t find your way to her womb Kindle not her magical powers I have exhausted them beyond use already She is no more competent for your desires... its a fantastic vision.... more i applaud ur writing talent....the overflowing rhtymic words, further its poetical panorama...........thnks much for sharing a good work/salu

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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

meaningful personification of a cosmic concept..nicely linked to lovelier poetic body..spiced with rich poetic vocab...10++

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Nikhail Pandhi

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