Fire Comments

Sounds like fire is the answer to everything.

It burns in the stars To make the universe possible It burns in the stars To have the heavens going It burns the stars really great well done

completely abstract form.

beautifull thoughts.beautifull write.i love this para 'The ancient mother earth Still cherishes the fire In the hearth of her heart To keep her progenies warm And her oceans so fluid' posted 10 love surya

an excellent write, and the way that you express what you see in your mind, is far beyond the time. GR8T WRITE A TEN

Amazing composition on fire 10

what a great poem..... i gave you 10.. you can read mine too..

A nice take on fire - dramatic imagery.

a poem written with a great understanding.10 shan

What a glorious tribute to the Fire from the beginning to the end!

the point was well made, but it felt more explanatory than poetic.

its really great. deep and meaningfull

A master stroke from you. Loved it very much, sir. The fire that runs, the that burns Fire of the belly our food churns It is the beauty with fire glows Through the universe fire flows Fire ends the life's grand show CP

Dear Poet, Pray the Sun God everyday, provides fire to all stars and keeps you survive and rotates for examinations, may fail in that. Be careful of burns.

a meaningful verses...well presented....10

fire yes we all need it good write 10

Fire is the need of life. Thanks.

LOVE BURNS HIGHER BECAUSE OF THE FIRE. FOR WITHOUT FIRE, HOW WOULD WE SURVIVE. ANOTHER TEN

another nice poem of yours. good philosophy of fire... everything is some how related and dependent on it.

Fire is your breath And fire is your thirst Polemically all the rivers are nothing but fire Fire flows to quench the fire of all! - This sums up everything. Heat is the undercurrent of all. Cold is only a relative aspect with respect to man's experience. Heat is the life of all. Heat is movement. Heat brings about various transformations. Actually, heat is only an experience of all lives. What does heat mean to a dead person? Our senses carry heat and light and so we are able to experience it in every atom of the universe.