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That poem is excelent. You are exploring your dark side and it is telling me that you are far from being perfect, and sends me the message that tells me and everybody else. Don't expect too much of me, I am just a kid growing up.

An emotionally intense and well-written poem that is full of vivid imagery, which possesses the unique ability to transport the reader, completely. This is a real work of art. Thanks for sharing. 10+

I loved this poem. Great write.