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The Garden-croft of Paradise
As the tender name suggests
There buried deep are many dreams
That once would adorn many eyes
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ameen.. may Allah rest dere souls in peace.. description of ds graveyard is presented in a very beautiful way.. great!
So beautiful Shahzia.Very nice poem.The pictorial description is adorable.
a tribute to people you cared most........its difficult to describe love for the eternal as care for them inside our hearts flow incessantly like rivers.........so great.......shahazia
A picturesque description of the final resting place...not eerie as most imagine it as!
I join you to share the sense of this deep loss. I wish there were souls and we could all be there. A deep silence surrounds me Shahziaji.
I feel as if I have visited this place which is kept so beautiful with a serene ambience! It is where great souls sleep! Among them I see two sepulchres where your parents rest in peace which I assume, you frequent with flowers in hand and prayers in your heart! ! Sweet poem! !
Two graves there... Keeping your joys. And their joys and hopes and dreams may reach destiny. Ameen
A delightful garden where peace does exist. so many souls are taking eternal rest waiting for eternal abode. A beautiful write.
Wow a sweet heavenly peaceful poem on a heavenly cemetry. May yor parents rest in peace and may we all go to the real firdaus. Kudos. Tanzania ke qabrastan me to roz chai tikya ya samosa khaten hayn hamare shia, ronaq rehti hay.
May God rest their souls in peace. A visit brings memories of best of times with them. Truth of life is those who live must live and they wished so.
May their Souls rest in peace...We can only pray that. Touching lines. Two graves there have my joys keep In which my parents peacefully sleep All those who are lying there May God rest their souls in peace! Lovely poem Shahzia...
Some dear ones here have made their beds Their beings lie there in eternal rest ............................... ............................. All those who are lying there May God rest their souls in peace! ................. touched my heart.
Two graves there have my joys keep In which my parents peacefully sleep All those who are lying there May God rest their souls in peace! beautiful poem, , , , ,
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Have been there.Also visited officially the living graveyard- Kot Lakhpat.No lakhpatis seem to live there.Victims of feudalism.Though the foods were good in Lahore.Women cover their faces with hijabs and naqabs have seen.When you want to speak Punjabi they run away or tend to be in hurry and when in Arabic- they either do not understand or want that you speak Punjabi/Urdu.Amidst graveyards I feel for the women whose freedom of speech and womanhood are in graves whose name are also Firdausis.They live in austerity.No marigold, roses, seasonal blossoms for them.Great penning yours.