Saturday, September 16, 2006

Finnished Comments

Rating: 3.0

Boy across the water, sits and looks out to sea,
he’s watching the horizon, thinking of me.
Boy across the water, with fine, golden hair,
speaks privately to God, wishing I was there.
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Steve Hagget 16 September 2006

Nice poem - full of feeling and a nice flowing and neat style, Steve

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Dan Brown

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