Saturday, October 3, 2015

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Know this, a time comes when one must face
the darkness of reality. The cruel and gruesome
realism that awaits the aging body. A fist full
of ugly comes pouncing down the path and the
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Melvina Germain
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Mj Lemon 05 October 2015

The fist full of ugly...How reality does strike with great suddenness, force, and resolve...This is an amazing work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 October 2015

Planning for a better day Home is where you ought to be, No institutions for you Save your money and be good to others, May true love look after you. These are the anecdotes that may help one to lead the evening of life peacefully. However, it is generally found that the one who love their old kith and kin face lot of limitations due to ever intensifying struggle for existence. In such scenario the old people may not like to ss their suffering. Hence it is better to compromise wherever possible and bear possible hardships. Thanks for sharing.

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Melvina Germain 03 October 2015

Thank you so much for coming by, reading and commenting on my poem.....

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 03 October 2015

Reality of life. Distressing but true. The ‘time’ that is available in this instant is our own. At least we can save for ourselves, be with good people, and believe firmly in ‘a healthy body in a healthy mind’. I’m just trying to be positive, though it is so difficult.

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Melvina Germain 03 October 2015

Thank you much appreciated.....

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Kelly Kurt 03 October 2015

I had a rather long, dramatic introspection typed in here but as I hit send, it vanished. So let me just say, I know what you are talking about. Just keep smiling, Melvina! !

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Melvina Germain 03 October 2015

Thank you Kelly for your continual support of reading my poems.....

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 03 October 2015

Verily, the passing time of life concludes to old age bringing weakness, helplessness, dependent traits in our life and we should be prepared to face the it. A lovely poem conveying a message...........10

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Melvina Germain 03 October 2015

I appreciate the comment and the vote Abdulrazak.....

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Melvina Germain

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