Finish The Journey Comments
The world is same as you see
But you are not free
You have to create
And recreate
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Like 18 hours ago by Mr. Frivolous to Finish the journey
Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 2 hrs · Unlike · 1
Hasmukh Mehta welcome mericl remirez 3 secs · Unlike · 1
welcome sheena maria annnis and shujat ahmed, hosnery banu 15 secs · Unlike · 1
Hasmukh Mehta welcome Ramesh Doshi, Rohani Daud 8 secs · Unlike · 1
Re: Finish the journey (Score: 1) tis true Frances Hileman2 hours ago Reminds me of an article I read by a friend of mine in Lufkin daily called congratulations class of 2014 your nobodies now.... You might like it to
Re: Finish the journey (Score: 1) by jadia4708au on Sunday, June 01,2014 (00: 57: 42) Like 9 minutes ago by Mr. Frivolous | Reply
great word usage, poor sentence structure Dan Swab6 minutes ago once again, you use amazing vocabulary and words that create imagery. however, you have poor sentence structure. lines like 'to walk on sharp edge of knife' sounds like somebody who doesn't speak english is saying this. im not sure if this was done intentional, to fit the flow of the poem, but it takes away from your message. inspirational message though. well done Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago sharp edge of knife is reality of life dear.. it is always beautiful combination Comment +1
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7/20/2025 12:52:25 PM # 1.0.0
.... and finish the journey! Great piece