Monday, March 19, 2018

Finish Point.. Comments

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Mistakes are not been repeated
But you are defeated
Victory is at the distant end
But don't lose hope and go ahead
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Rini Shibu
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Seamus O Brian 22 March 2018

An encouraging thought to begin the day. Thank you, Rini!

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Rini shibu 22 March 2018

Thanks Seamus, glad to read your comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

Though victory is in much distance yet we mustn't lose hope and to go ahead. Time will come we must reach the goal. Beautiful poem amazingly shared.10

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks kumarmani for your wonderful remark

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Lamar Cole 19 March 2018

Great poem about finish point.

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks cole for reading and commenting Rini

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 March 2018

Need patience to move on ye soo true Riny, one day we are all going to reach the finishing point...... our efforts now in writing is highly calculated by God... i hope and pray that we all meet together as poets and poetesses in heaven..... tony

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks Tony.hope we all meet together

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 March 2018

Rini, such an inspiring write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thank you so much Bernard for commenting Rini

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Nosheen Irfan 19 March 2018

A lovely motivational poem to read at the start of the day. Full of positive energy, the poem fills the reader with hope.

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks Nosheen for your compliments Rini

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 March 2018

Hi rini, Good poem, kindling thoughts of hope and confidence. But, the last line? SWIPE- does it convey the meaning intended by you?

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thank you so much unnikrishnan...

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Kostas Lagos 19 March 2018

Beautiful poem.Life has many sorrowful moments but it continues and we have to overcome them.

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Rini Shibu 20 March 2018

Thanks kostas for your wonderful comment

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