Thursday, May 28, 2009

Fingertips On My Back. Comments

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I can feel your fingertips pushing
Causing a catalyst, peripheral transduction
My merkel's discs mechanorecepting
My brain registering all these senses
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Roshni D'Souza 28 May 2009

WOW... a bit reminiscent of my neuro class in the beginning, but I love what you did with it. Brilliant ending!

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Kim Dang

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