Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Fingers In The Pie (Children's Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting on a windows ledge
on a warm summers day,
sat a pie waiting to cool
before the break of noon.
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Melvina Germain
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Mj Lemon 24 November 2015

Sometimes youth does win! ! A great rhyme, for young and old.

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Loke Kok Yee 12 November 2015

used to do that as a child thanks Melvina

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Chuy Amante 11 November 2015

every time my neighbor starts cooking I want to seal that whole pot of Tai food, let's not even talk about fried chicken a nice write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

Wonderful expression shared. A marvelous art work wisely drafted....10

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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