Friday, April 10, 2009

Fine Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

What have I done,
Without you?
Let me see.....
I watched a candle burn out,
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Tiffany Wolf
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James Mclain 17 April 2009

You write very well you will go very far you keep writeing...iip..thanks you

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Ken E Hall 12 April 2009

The title says it all thats how it should be when a love moves on.. nice read, Sir Lancelot could be just around the corner regards

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Eyan Desir 11 April 2009

AWWW Well I feel sorry For this guy that lost you HE lost A great talent HIS lost move on little lady 10+

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thought you couldn't od without me.. now what is this ia m hearing? ? lol.. nice write my friend....

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hmmm how did I come across this poem? ...let's see..... sht... idk... but it was worth stopping to read... nicely done... ps. i like how it rhymes.. but not every line... thats genious of you :) really.... keep it up.

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