Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, July 12, 2014

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What is fear?
Why one should cry for girl?
Or girl should be made to cry...
It is simply trying
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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very nice Sam G5 minutes ago A moving poem you wrote Comment +1

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there may be problems, but you can overcome them and end well Sydney Rain Sterzik5 minutes ago i liked this poem, it is well structured, and i can relate to the feelings. good job! Comment +1

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Couldn't understand David Cephus2 minutes ago It was hard for me to grab and hold on to. I usually try to hear a voice and I couldn't here. Perhaps because I couldn't understand your message and lacked some flow. Keep on writing and express yourself in different topics.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 July 2014

it is a matter to think, though simple sir. please see my new poems ,

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What is fear? Why one should cry for girl?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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