Tuesday, December 25, 2012

Fine Christmas Comments

Rating: 5.0

Calm descends within the rain
Seagulls bellow as wet tires rush
Onwards and upwards
Forging new destinations
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karen sinclair
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Valerie Dohren 08 January 2013

Too, late to wish you a Merry Christmas Karen, but I can wish you all the best for the New Year. An excellent write, very relevant in the 21st century.

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Danny Draper 08 January 2013

Great emotion and imagery, reflective of an increasingly secular event that is more revelant to many as a celebration of relationships with friends and family and reflections at the end of the year. No matter where we are we are loved and in some ones thoughts and in turn, they are in ours. Tangerine lights in blocks of flats betray the restless Cracks in the clouds display the hope that It shall be a fine winters day are beautiful lines.

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