'Fine As Cat...' Comments

What a wonderful poem - the subject matter is totally unexpected after reading the title. It reminds me of my son when he was little. He always woke up laughing and could never remember the punchline! But more than that, the figurative language used to denote the ephemerality of the dreamlike state is just perfect. S :)

Amazing composition with nice imagery,10+++

Very nice, full of action and images with a surprise ending. This line is nice: 'like a breeze through the spider's web'.