Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Findings And Losings (Song From The Madman) Comments

Rating: 4.3

One day I opened a book and it happened that it showed me strange things,
said it there stays some love for me in you, , , ,
, , , , , Moments passed of mistaken amazement
for a little while later i realised that i the book was upside down when I opened it that day,
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Shahzia Batool 14 March 2012

Somethings how strange they are, best found only when lost, Some letters of spring always remain incomplete, and sometimes though complete without the address... Some songs of autumn go unheard, , , some moments of winter remain unheld. It does not fit the seasons to end the way they do.....very beautiful...are you really 21? amazing to compose lines with proverbial taste...

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Kayla Howard 12 March 2012

I like the opening about the book. Very funny and a great anecdote to start. sky of life is the best part. It creates active thoughts. Broken a tad but can be fixed. Overall i give an eight.

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Neela Nath Das 11 March 2012

Philosophical note. Usage of simile is fantastic.

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Apeksha Kumar 09 March 2012

awesome indeed! :) all the best :)

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