Monday, April 28, 2008

Finding Yourself Comments

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I thought you said you loved me
thought you were the one
to finally see
the true beauty deep inside me
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Barbara Terry 28 April 2008

Shadow Kiss, you are so right. Love is the greatest adventure. This stanza is right on: Somehow it seems that every girl must suffer But I guess that’s how we mature Because as my heart heals I have gotten a lot tougher Love is, after all, the greatest adventure When our intended love, or what we think is our intended love, does not share our feelings of actual love, but treats it like it was yesterday's garbage, then it is time to let them go. and yes this IS how we mature and become tougher, so that the next time we meet with someone who promises to love us and protect us, we will make sure we go with caution, because if we throw caution to the wind, then we are the ones who are seriously and emotionally hurt. You have written a very heartfelt, soulful, and emotional poem of unrequited love. If you will, please read my poem 'Unrequited Love'. Thank you so much for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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