Friday, February 6, 2015

Finding You Pt. One: Jumping On The Trampoline Comments

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Jumping on the trampoline
High in the pale yellow sky singing
I'm the only girl in the world
my sun dress in wintertime floats in the breeze
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Leah Ayliffe
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Kayode Peter Ogunleye 10 February 2015

The sun calming down No longer high But still magnificent I undress my mind, thoughts drifting to the floor of the moon. Nice reading true, love the rhythm of the poem. thanks for sharing.

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Leah Ayliffe

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