Finding Ways........A Prosaic Comments

Your gifted pen keeps hope alive even on a gray evening, Surayya. Written with great sensitivity. Warm regards, Sandra

Your poem rings such positive notes to make the future better for those in poor circumstances. Meaningful and lovely poem. 10 Karin Anderson

Like the inclusion of all (creatures) in this poem Surayya, where there is even a glimmer of hope we can turn it around by finding a way. Well written

Finding ways to hope and to go on. How well I know this personally. This is such a great poem Surayya. It depicts it all so well and very delicately but also with clarity. I love the title too. Very appropriate. I would never have thought of it. VEry nice.

A prosaic very close to the nature and describes all aspects of the daily life of all creatures. All the criterion of observational methodology have been fulfilled nicely in this poem and put in words provoking several slopy minds of recouping themselves and keep on trying for the destiny can only be achieved if one stays pragmatic and prodded to the paths that lead to success...10/10