Finding Self Comments

caged in office with stupid mad people around, enraged emotions out of the search are found, lives wasted and rooted in the chain of money, no one bothers as long as someone calls honey... nice to find verses with good rhythm and message.... it is bonded life till mo prob with good address, , nice one..10

liked these lines as the conclusion. feel different and fine, spent decades being blind, a diverse person hiding inside, see the world with wider eyes, finding a reason would suffice, to the mysteries of my virtue and vice, I can't complain I don't despise, loosing self at a price, I have me now without a compromise, finding self after victimized. a diverse person in u. search for a reason, mysteries...finding self.. these are only high valued philsophical terms.if u develop you will become a great philosopher poet. thank you. this is the first time i came across ur poems. i love to read more. thank u

RINKI YOU HAVE WELL EXPRESSED THE FEELINGS OF THE WOMAN INSIDE YOU AND ALSO ITS DYNAMIC GROWTH THROUGH YOUR VERSE! -Raj

‘disappointment from self is only obvious, ’…self devaluation…is self deception…why Dear Poet? ...well…melancholy is a subject….of poets…I find melancholy is your favorite subject… ‘…loosing self at a price, /I have me now without a compromise, finding self after victimized.’…poetically very painfully …you’ve made me somber…I think your poem is reached to acme of my soft psychic element…indeed a vista for me… thanks sharing... Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

And the world goes round..true facts of daily living. Well expressed through your pen! ; D

The way you write your mind is Commendable...Your poems has a power and a depth....Appreciated

We have to go through things in life