Don't cry,
suck' it up.
Go to the edge,
close your eyes.
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Hi...well the story line of this poem is a cocktail of unhappiness...who wants to jump and never wake up...peace is within ones self...negative writing is no good for any reader...make your pen wake up...you can write so keep it going...regards
Peace is the ultimatum..ur poem is mouthpiece here