Finding Paradise Comments

This is the THIRD time I'm typing my comment - PH keeps erasing me, but I like this poem too much not to acknowledge it! What a wonderful poem about your grandparents! What wonderful grandparents to pass this story through you on its way to POETRY! The key line for me was OUR ONE COLLECTED SOUL the whole poem is contained in that kernel of truth but I'm glad you elaborated the narrative to tell the whole story. It has a ballad-like integrity. And the sentiment is heart-felt. GRANDPARENTS: One of nature's really successful inventions, don't you agree?

Such a heartfelt and emotional poem. Although so very heartbreaking and sad when one whom we love so deeply is taken before their time, I've always felt in that circumstance that young love will live on for eternity. Beautifully written poem.