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Finding New Years Love Comments

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Finding New Year's Love

Softly I cry as the tears roll down
Falling upon an uncaring ground
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louis rams
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Practicing Poetess 24 February 2018

Uncaring ground- - - the reader can almost feel the ache as they read. A poem that accurately captures heartache, loneliness, sadness brilliantly. You see writer's determination, and wish for them a happy ending.

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