Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Finding My Way Home To You Comments

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I don't remember how many times I have walked this path
Back to your arms each time
I face the mountains that is a welcoming sight
Finding my way back home to you.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 04 March 2010

That is full of those good, familiar feelings, the return to where you should be. Hiden in there is also that touch of sadness that you were away at all, prompting the need for the journey back. The language holds those feelings and conveys them eloquently to the reader. Nicely done - and much loved by this admiring reader.

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