Finding Loves Fool Comments

i l0ved the way you wrote this i wish i could fine a guy with everything you describe in the poem l0lz but yeah its REALLY good

I see you like the 'orrow' sound, ha-ha. But this is a really nice piece. I love the lines: Find me now Without sorrow Find me now in Heavens tomorrow and you ended it very, very well. Continue writing Cody.

This is another terrific piece. Might have reduced the size, some redundancy. Still it is simply a superb verse.

beautiful.......................

a good theme...a good writer...blend it together...we will get a great poem like 'finding loves fool'....10 for it bro: P

love comes in right persons in right time.....nice poem...i like it! ! !