Finding Love In The All Night Grocery Comments

This is really fun, Jesse, and very creative. Makes me think about shopping late at night! :) I love to read a poet who has a sense of humor as well as a serious side. Raynette

Hello Jesse, Must say I love this poem! the images the whole tone. I'll be watching for you in my local grocery store lol Carol

I love all your plays on words, I love seeing the whole thing! I love the very idea of this poem, and your flippant, energized tone. One my first couple readings, the only thing that doesn't quite come off for me, is the ending. I think I'd like to see more punch in the last two lines! If I feel differently tomorrow, I'll let you know.