Friday, October 17, 2008

Finding Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its never happened, I hope it will
I really don’t care what some people may think;
But ill be strong, walk ahead leave things behind
With a carefree smile, crossing every mile
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shruti modi
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Sameer Ahmed 30 January 2009

A short holistic poem with two aspects of love.......the one you didnt find but still hopeful of getting one right.........be optimistic........you will find it one day.........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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premji premji 24 November 2008

shruti, you travel through untrodden paths.. 10+++++

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john v 27 October 2008

nice one but my views abt all ur poem i've sent it in a msg just check your inbox

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 October 2008

A strong and assertive personality as you are, you write well. the tone is striking. ryour biography is blank enough and there is no image of you we are made blind. thank you. deevali greetings. shanmugam chettiar

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Kesav Easwaran 25 October 2008

good determination there...a poem talking its desires out...good piece, Shruti 10

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