Her teardrops is like falling rain pouring down the windowpane,
Her great love is gone because he was hard to tame,
He was much older then her but he still had the sparkle of youth in his eyes,
Like the dawn breaking through the optimistic skies,
...
Read full text
Love is lost in the month of May, With her heart shattered like broken glass falling from above, ........... well penned Again, She has become a vagabond of love, Always moving on searching for home, turned pathetic, melancholic, , , , , , above all, it has been an outstanding one, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++++ 10
She had been sure they sang from the same song Beautiful! Keep writing! !
You captured the true feelings of a lover as she is trying to figure out how scenes unfolded and how things changes...Amusing.......great read.10
Love is lost. With her heart shattered like broken glass falling from above, She has become a vagabond of love, Always moving on searching for home, Bleeding heart. you express the pain, suffering, shattering, destruction of expectations, desire to love and to be loved. thank you. this is a powerful poem.
As lovers try to capture her bleeding heart but without him she is always alone.........Sadness ending. Beautiful narration and thrilling expression of poem touches the hearts of readers. Marvellous poem. ...10
Touching memories of a lost love in loneliness are too painful. A nice description of human sentiments, who can understand such feelings even the victim can't, who can forget a relationship that was based on love, even if it has so many handicaps.
The heroine of the poem is still in the clutch of a failed love! She is not able to forget him as he was so charming! His passion was like the sizzling sun Beating down relentlessly into a fever of fun, ..... No wonder she fell for him! Both had a gloomy past and both were vagabonds in love! This identical fate must have drawn them together! But before the love could fruition, he left her shattering all her new dreams! It is a sad story... so touching!
The difference between years of lovers is not important if they have chemistry. It brings everything: Respect, love and duration. Great part of Love...