Friday, September 25, 2015

Finding Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her teardrops is like falling rain pouring down the windowpane,
Her great love is gone because he was hard to tame,
He was much older then her but he still had the sparkle of youth in his eyes,
Like the dawn breaking through the optimistic skies,
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Hazel Durham
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Jankovic Zoran 31 January 2019

The difference between years of lovers is not important if they have chemistry. It brings everything: Respect, love and duration. Great part of Love...

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Muzahidul Reza 02 March 2018

Love is lost in the month of May, With her heart shattered like broken glass falling from above, ........... well penned Again, She has become a vagabond of love, Always moving on searching for home, turned pathetic, melancholic, , , , , , above all, it has been an outstanding one, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++++++ 10

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Maya Hanson 19 October 2015

She had been sure they sang from the same song Beautiful! Keep writing! !

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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2015

You captured the true feelings of a lover as she is trying to figure out how scenes unfolded and how things changes...Amusing.......great read.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 October 2015

Love is lost. With her heart shattered like broken glass falling from above, She has become a vagabond of love, Always moving on searching for home, Bleeding heart. you express the pain, suffering, shattering, destruction of expectations, desire to love and to be loved. thank you. this is a powerful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2015

As lovers try to capture her bleeding heart but without him she is always alone.........Sadness ending. Beautiful narration and thrilling expression of poem touches the hearts of readers. Marvellous poem. ...10

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Akhtar Jawad 25 September 2015

Touching memories of a lost love in loneliness are too painful. A nice description of human sentiments, who can understand such feelings even the victim can't, who can forget a relationship that was based on love, even if it has so many handicaps.

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Anita Sharma 25 September 2015

such a excellent write.liked much

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Valsa George 25 September 2015

The heroine of the poem is still in the clutch of a failed love! She is not able to forget him as he was so charming! His passion was like the sizzling sun Beating down relentlessly into a fever of fun, ..... No wonder she fell for him! Both had a gloomy past and both were vagabonds in love! This identical fate must have drawn them together! But before the love could fruition, he left her shattering all her new dreams! It is a sad story... so touching!

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