Finding Heather Comments

i love poetry and if others enjoy reading my pieces then so be it... listen to advice but dont fret to much... dont write for others but instead write for yourself... you alone are the only judge that matters... i think your doing well! ! ! ! ! keep it up...

I'm afraid young Max, that you have a ways to go and a lot to learn so I won't put it on you at once. Please make sure the rhyming words actually have the same end sound. Now a lot of poets don't do that on Poemhunter. But it is a bad habit and I would like to see you avoid their bad habits. Also, always capitalize the word (I) . Not (i) . The rst is a little too much to get into right now, but you are young and have plenty of time. GW62