Find Your Mind Comments

I love that place David, it gives me a sense of peace and tranquility. Thanks again, another lovely piece.--Melvina

thanks for inviting...should try thinking different thoughts in different places...nalini

I have one of those places too David but this didn't quite get me there. I was left with an ambiguity: Your place or mine? A nice idea of a poem but I thought the last line superfluous. Escape versus inspiration perhaps.

Was ok but reminded me of some other poem...