Sunday, February 2, 2014

Find That Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes in Life
You can feel like your smile has been taken away
Will it come back
Did it not see the day
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Lyn Paul
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Md Elias Uddin 15 February 2014

Sometimes in Life The rain will not stop ................................... Yet always in life The grass will grow The sun will go down To awake a new tomorrow C'est vrai!

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Valsa George 10 February 2014

There are many like you yet they need so much more Give to those to open a new door Great message! The sun will come to awaken a new morrow.....Great optimism! !

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Kanav Justa 10 February 2014

Find that smile let it shine It all will come good It just takes a little time, , , , could feel the positive vibes coming out from this poem, , , , love this, , ,

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 February 2014

Wow yes enjoyd yor poetic positivity here! Finely motivating! Admird the curdle hurdle rhyme choice. Take care lyn.

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Dee Corpolongo 06 February 2014

Love it and esp. the closing lines....again, great advice! Also, knowing that others are going through their own pains and trials, helps you not think of your own, and sharing your smile with others is so thoughtful and will bring smiles back to you! Thank you for this reminder.

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Liliana ~el 05 February 2014

Very lovely and positive Comes together quite nicely Really like how you conclude this poem need so much more Give to those... ...let it shine... It just takes a little time Always hang on with hope Good is sure to come However, idle waiting is not the way to go about beautiful days.

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Valerie Dohren 04 February 2014

A poem of hope and good advice - time is a great healer.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 February 2014

Once again a Wonderful poem with positive words overflowing. One has to find that Smile. Inspiring words... Find that smile let it shine It all will come good It just takes a little time......Yes, each day ends and begin each day like a new sunrise. Inspiring words. Loved reading it.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 February 2014

your writings are so powerfully inspiring, always make me get back!

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