Monday, January 11, 2010

Find No Love Comments

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Why can't it be
The way I'd wish it would be
Not knowing you have no love for me
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Aira Olayvar 11 January 2010

“Find no love” The title sounds good, and I know, just like me, you are also striving for improvement. It is good for you to form this piece. Though I wish that the end should have been: Find no Love, Find no Hate, there’s no Life at all. Mine is just a suggestion, though I like it as a whole. :)

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