Thursday, September 21, 2006

Find Me At The Edge Comments

Rating: ★5.0

You will find me at the edge
Of the water
Where the sand and deep
Ocean meet
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Dawn Michelle
ocean collide
COMMENTS
Tailor Bell 22 September 2006

you show careful construction and graceful rhyme. good structure. i especially like varying interpretation in some lines...'though now paralyzed...I close my eyes'. nice work. -Tailor B.

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Brittany Hill 21 September 2006

This poem was very good, and I like I you compared with the ocean, Good Job.

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Dawn Michelle

Dawn Michelle

Van Nuys, California
Dawn Michelle
Dawn Michelle
Van Nuys, California
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