Thursday, May 16, 2013

Find Me A Place Comments

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Find me a place where it would be safe
A place as silent as grave
As dark as space
Find me a place in which I could rest
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Mehri Mehraban 16 November 2013

I respect your style and rhyme in this poem. Of course I disagree with the last stanza. I think your dreamy land cannot be found in our lovely Wonderful earth!

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 June 2013

This is a dream dreams that make us to always survive, fight and do not give up hope indeed a very good work thanks for sharing

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Tara X 12 June 2013

there is a world but not on earth the world you can not imagine or explain but there is a long road to it and you must choose, fight and build it.

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Valsa George 21 May 2013

Oh.... can there exist such a utopean land? Though not possible to find, wishful thinking will take us to such a world of near reality! ! Enjoyed! !

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Sekharan Pookkat 19 May 2013

It is the place none other than our mind

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Unwritten Soul 16 May 2013

If we can find the clouds, and if we can go there...i can shall find you the place as you dream...and all we have in the sky....so secret and pure like it is from heaven..with tears of love in the raindrop below_Soul

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