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Thanks for the rhythm and the rhyme and all the fabulous little itzy-bitzy things in your wonderful poem!

Great poem. Enjoyed reading. Nice sentiments on his we lose what we need to be really focused on.

Very good poem and structure. This is the same style as some of mine. Thank you for sharing.

Really beautiful Susan

Ah, a perfect rhythm, and whimsical.

the end bit of each stanza...gives the poem a lovely texture... apart from the charm it adds to it an urgency and a focus, scarcely possible to escape the recurring refrain.... enjoyed reading it.... liked

Amazing work! Thank you for sharing

I enjoyed this write especially your last 3 lines.

Love the rhyme and flow of this poem, a lovely work Susan

rhythm is your gesture, genuimely carved...poetry breaths freely where rhythm does not have to suffer coercion...I like your art. Rites Ghosh