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If you wake up at night
And you find me asleep
Please don't wake me
To show me the white Butterfly.
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Yes. It would leave to form another larva. Beautiful metaphor Luz. A poem sweet and deep 10+
Kesav, thank you for commenting, this is one of my first poems, goes back to 2007. Thank you for my 10+ also.
An amazing poetic expression, dear Ma’am Luz...10+++
If you wake up at night And you find me asleep Please don't wake me To show me the white Butterfly... ...10++++++++ vote for this beautiful poem
I must quote.... Please don't hurt it or capture it... let it be. It is my soul That has finally gone free. Open the door and let me go.
Wow! ! Yes we have fragile souls that need freedom to express our uniqueness in a world of wanting, finding and keeping, but the fragile soul needs the wild and windy landscape to escape the prison of entitlement! Brilliant write! !
I think this is that lovely poem by you, you wanted to know.
I just read and translate this poem in Albanian and distribute it to facebook with my friends Liz... (sorry) . Forgive me, but we can not let you go because you need poetry... Congrats. Riza
An insightful write. Let me quote....... It is my soul That has finally gone free. Open the door and let me go. As soul is immortal, after death soul goes to God or takes birth as per his karma(action) . Beautiful poem.10
This beautiful poem is soul searching. I have a special feeling for butterflies. Thank you.
Free! ! ! But, always with the scars of life. Thanks for sharing.
lovely poem.. with a lil. words u gave a nice story happy and lovely, , love it :)
It is nice. I personally would like more description about the butterfly, what it is going to do now, etc.
The poem mentions that the butterfly is my soul, so when released to be free from my body, the butterfly will fly straight to God. Sorry for such late response.
The beauty in this elegant and honest poem is fantastic! Another fine piece Luz!
A truly beautiful inditement. Well done! I like how straight to the point the poem is.
this is well crafted idea with a simplicity of an affirmative request to be free. Wonderful piece of poem and I love it. Well done.10 for you.
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5 Stars for this amazing poem. Powerfully worded poem. Please keep writing, we have now a brandnew Homepage since December 2020