Wednesday, March 29, 2006

Finally Comments

Rating: 5.0

With sweet red lips glistening with wine
Together shared in heart felt embrace
For a laugh and a tear of joy
Has held still in the light of her face
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Abby Wesson
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Jim Foulk 15 January 2007

good write, nice, write on

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Elizabeth Castleberry 30 March 2006

i like the imagery, especially the 'sweet red lips'

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