Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Finally Comments

Rating: 4.5

We enjoy the colors, we enjoy the sound
They're a natural gift we find all around
We have been blessed with such beautiful things
A great joy for us average human beings
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Deborah Cromer
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Roshni D'Souza 17 August 2009

There is a very rhythmic quality to your writing and I really like the simple rhyme scheme... Makes it a pleasure to read out loud. Thanks, roshni.

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sky dreams 06 June 2009

this is a great poem.. very uplifting and inspiring.10++

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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