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Imbibe the abstractness from the universe,
And give it, your own concrete solidity.
Imbibe the obscurity of the voids around,
And give them hues
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'the excitedness of the flower that blooms, and the lazy love of each closing petal…. Let all these slowly spread in my being' enlivening poetry, Sarvesh...an excellent write... imaginative and expressive...skillfully both...10
wonderful ruminations, sarvesh...is it solidarity or solidity in the second line?
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7/23/2025 8:02:12 AM # 1.0.0
It has delved deep... A wonderful thing to put in words, and with such abandon of the feelings, It is as if your piece carries the fragile parts of you, of your thought. I liked the vulnerability I felt imagining this things happening to me. Your world must be a beautiful place to have this things for inspiration. Loved your piece. Merlin Mwaura.