Finally you're back to me
Although for just to say goodbye
After years of silence
Now we can bury past in peace
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This verse is as elegant and vulnerable as silk. There's a sense of release and relief....and the opportunity to forge ahead. Great poem, Soul.
You really hit the nail here, my dear. If only- -at the appropriate time in our life- -we would meet again those we once were close to but for various reasons have gone separate ways. It would be closure to actually say good-bye, wouldn't it? To feel that the love or the friendship was worth more than a sudden disappearance without a word said. To tell him or her they meant a lot at that time and how it would have been better for both him and yourself if he had left a good memory behind than shuffling away without a word. Vety well and wisely written, my friend.10+++++.
Beautiful write Soul. Forgiveness is like removing heavy burden from our heart especially to move forward in life.Keep writing.
A swim in the ocean of emotions. To dive and sink in such ocean.. is what I am saying 'a swim'! Beautiful thoughts
Brilliant poem with lovely sentiments. We can never really guess where life's journey will take us so there are always final meetings which we do not know will be the last and something remain unsaid.
Thank you Chris, actually it was a bittersweet experience and face it as like many of us here, i think its about one of our life chapters...Talking about people and how we have to move on..I agree with your comment...it just honestly true :)
After years of silence. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Forgiveness, the way of our creator A forgiving heart calms the mind, lights the soul. Wonderful poem, showing the wonderful soul in Soul.
Outstanding poem. Friends are meant to forgive and forget....We take chances against them and commit mistakes deliberately to check the consequences and then reconcile easily....10+++
This is such a sweet poem of emotions that are healed. There is no noble act greater than forgiveness. A big burden is released from the heart. Though you are going separate ways - you have tread on a spiritual path. God bless! So happy to give you a full 10.
I'm sure it would be like as you have described if you met again. A beautiful poem Soul. Your trusting heart shines in your poems and I see this in your words...10
Finally Finally lets move to somewhere new To end the start with the same, lasting and beautiful Finally We will going there... Separately......... nice expression with meaningful theme. Beautiful poem on friendship and life. Thanks for sharing.