This is the time we’ve all waited for
Now it’s here, standing before us all
What have you got to offer it?
How much have you acquired?
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i lyk da main theme as it is directed 2 a main category of audience....however i think it wud hv been betr wid a more specific rhyme scheme n pattern..unless u prefer abstainin from writin traditional poetry? ?
nice theme and makes sense....young equipped with your degree, make it to the top!