Sunday, September 4, 2005

Final Comments

Rating: 3.4

When he asked her to stay,
when he pleaded and begged,
when he reasoned with logic
she just stood by the door,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 04 September 2005

Short good-byes are the best.

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Mary Nagy 04 September 2005

Nice scene you've painted here. Goodbyes are difficult whether they're calm as you've described or crazy. Nice one. Sincerely, Mary

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