Wednesday, May 4, 2005

Final Wishes Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I die and they put on a show
with my body, I guess I won't know
but it'll cost a bunch, which I can't abide
just to fill me up with formaldehyde.
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Chuck Audette
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Patti Masterman 22 October 2009

This is my kind of humor! Love the irony. Your irony carries a lot of atomic weight..(smile)

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 06 November 2007

Charles, Thank you for the laugh! Dorothy Cynthia A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Barry Van Allen 18 April 2007

Chuck, That is just spiteful, Hilarious... but, spiteful! B.V.A.

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R H 15 April 2006

Your wry humour shines through once again - brilliant write with a satisfying twist at the end. Smiling again :) Justine.

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Esther Leclerc 02 March 2006

Could be a scene in a funny movie! This is great from start to unexpected ending. : ]

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Lea Simpson 01 February 2006

Great language and rhythm! I really enjoyed this.

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Dan Brown 11 January 2006

Hi, you were right, I do like it. Nicely done, and the twist at end is genius.

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Poetry Hound 20 September 2005

Very clever and hilarious. Dark humor wins every time. The wry-er the better.

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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