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Virginia Jasmin Pasalo Beautiful, ................Hasmukh! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1

Emy Perez Lovely poem! 44 mins · Like · 1

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Awww lovely ink tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings 3 hours ago by angel mia pg to Final wish

Commendable work... Your last 2 stanzas are strong and eloquently express passion and romance in equivalence to the majestic beauty of the image of the Rose you posted below your poem...Try and be more cognizant of prepositions, and certain nouns that require the use of the preposition ''THE preceding it...///// IE: ' '''And staying On floor', really should read 'Staying on 'THE' floor'. And, if I could be so bold to further suggest that...''Lying on the floor' might even make your effort shine brighter...however, that's your call, not mine...Just an IMO, is all ~FjR~

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