Final Union Comments

Heartiest congratulations on this poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day' - an well deserved honor! The poem touched me deep, it's beautiful in its sadness and simple tone. 'Be praised when you are laid to rest All my praise, prayers go to you My lifeless goddess, My Guardian Angel Rest in peace my gentle mother, As light as you have lived in this world' - a heart touching tribute!

An emotional homage from a grateful son to his loving mother. The outpourings and the images re-create the sombre scene of the burial ground where the departed one goes for her final union. Our sincere condolences.

Very touching yet one of the best eulogy I have read.....each word and each sentence so extraordinarily framed to convey the depth of feelings for a goddess mother you loved so much in your life 10+++

A beautifully crafted piece honouring a very special creature in your life. I share in your sentiments i have been there before. Nicely penned.

Absolutely, incredibly, undeniably BEAUTIFUL, beyond words. Majestic.

Congratulations on poem of the day! A very nice tribute. I do not understand line five, however. What does that mean?

(.... ...) On the bud of soil The fire of eyes is distinguished Belief, lonely wandering clouds Under the soil seeking final version of union///

Time becomes tired In this veins of life Now the path Grown up more At the old bank of searching Nothing is disclosed Tired and tired Full hands of years Now tired (... ...)

All my praise, prayers go to you My lifeless goddess, My Guardian Angel Rest in peace my gentle mother, As light as you have lived in this world...beautifully written; gently the breath gone and now rest in peace is the final union

A poignant write, but a remarkable eulogy to a mother. Congratulations a well deserved poem of the day.

All my praise and prayers go to yo My lifeless goddess and guardian angel Rest in peace my gentle mother. What a touching farewell words of a loving son!

A glowing tribute paid to mother memorizing all her plus points and the love and respect of the loved ones she commanded during the life time. Heartiest congratulations for the well deserved poem of the Day.

In a sunny patch of the burial grounds/No stars shooting out of cannons/No guns blazing or shiny swards held high/No angels descending from heavens to sing.....fascinating expression! Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

A very touching write- - a great tribute to your mother - - Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day! Let me quote from this wonderful poem- - Gods receive no praise at your final earthly union People you loved visibly marked Pained and holed Reluctant to let you go. You are loved in your kindness Treasured in the stories told Your strength drawn from a memory immortal

Very deep and touching! Celebrating life! A poignant write, a heartfelt tribute to a mother! Congrats on poem of day!

Congrats, not only for this poem being selected as member's poem but for describing the mother's death and after death in such an effective manner that its reader becomes speechless.

A fine poem speaks beautifully and realistically. Congrats.

All my praise and prayers go to you My lifeless goddess and guardian angel Rest in peace my gentle mother As light as you have lived in this world.........so touching and impressive. May her soul rest in peace. A beautiful tribute to mother.

A beautiful tribute to dear mother. Liked it so much.

All my praise and prayers go to you My lifeless goddess and guardian angel Rest in peace my gentle mother As light as you have lived in this world. a great poem, emotions, sadness.. calling the dearest mum a Goddess. tony