Tuesday, December 5, 2017

Final Tribute Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forever your omniscience,
Will live in my heart.
From infancy to manhood,
Taught me to take responsibility;
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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi
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Lincoln 02 July 2018

Very very emotional poem...it's easy to relate with.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 04 July 2018

Thanks Lincoln...much appreciated

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 April 2018

Eloquently penned poem, I relate to it as both my parents are late. But as you put in your beautifully written poem, they taught me well. I'm a MAN because of their teachings. They did their job perfectly, now it's up to you to heed their teachings. Siya_! !

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 20 April 2018

Thanks Siya for your comments, they really uplift my spirit of writing

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Simon 06 December 2017

Wow! Farewell my parents....what a very emotional poem? The doesn't tell us though, about what happened to your parents yet both died...and these are your last words for to them...It just let the reader to fill up the gabs....10++++

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Thanks for your kind and positive feedback to this poem...be blessed

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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

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