Friday, June 30, 2017

Final Times Comments

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The rain came down in a torrent, while
The rest of the world had slept,
The mud it churned was abhorrent,
It was as if the planet wept.
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David Lewis Paget
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Abderrahmane Dakir 13 July 2017

Wonderful poem and deeply description. I like it. Thanks for sharing.

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Jefferson Carter 01 July 2017

David, not bad for a rhyming poem. I like that God-thunderhead line. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it, and, if you do, perhaps share it with interested friends? Thanks! Yrs, JC

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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