Sunday, June 13, 2010

Final Straw Comments

Rating: 4.0

Welcome to the final straw.
You know you can't have them all.
Still you took each one-by-one,
and kept them now you have a ton.
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Emma Hasel
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Logan S 21 June 2010

Great job Emily...like said before, it is thought provoking.

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Kial Whitmire 21 June 2010

Wow, who would have thought those words would have merged into a coaxing solace for me. Great job and keep them coming.

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Leila Mass 18 June 2010

I liked this poem, it was interesting. I hope to see more coming! :) If you could, can you please take the time to read a couple of my poems. -Leila

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Jess Silva 17 June 2010

Hey Emily, I think this a good poem, its thought provoking. well done :)

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David Hayes 14 June 2010

Wow! That was amazing. Got any more poems waiting to happen?

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