Thursday, April 16, 2015

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Swarming around intellect, like bees to honey, ideas
buzzing incessantly and continually during awakening
hours of life events.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 18 April 2015

This poem throws out a wide net and pulls in so many activities of the MIND that enrich, even extend life. You beginwith a central image of purposeful activity - I'll call it the honeycomb because it involves the group actions of so many bees working in tandem. A HONEYCOMB is a decent symbol for human endeavor as well. You also seem to be alluding to the dance of the bees to convey info to each other - an amazing analogy to human art. Your poem goes far beyond this initial metaphor of the honeycomb to embrace human creativity in science and medicine as well, but I am really enamoured of those of those bees - like a bunch of poetw working intinmately together - if that; s possible for such free spirits!

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Amitava Sur 16 April 2015

It's an amazing thoughtful penning about the unending quest for realizing the ultimate truth and the ABSOLUTE and thus knowing some unknown which may help the mankind to recover from diseases and other deformities. Very wise and with in depth. Thank you

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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