Thursday, October 29, 2015

Final Movement Comments

Rating: 5.0

While time rings the bell
Life lights up and moves
We see child takes birth
He grows up to old age
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Milan Panda 13 October 2020

With the belling of time everything changes. All should walk with time. A nice poem!

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Kelly Kurt 29 October 2015

Every movement counts. Nicely written

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 October 2015

Yeah, every ones journey is fixed with time and destination. Nice drop.10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2015

'Life lifts up'! ! ! But, let us always seek for the truth and live. Nice work.

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Sanjukta Nag 29 October 2015

Final movement matters a lot - a truth of life is wisely shared.10

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Loke Kok Yee 29 October 2015

lovely poem on life's journey-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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